“How hard it is to escape from places. However carefully one
goes they hold you — you leave little bits of yourself fluttering on the fences
— little rags and shreds of your very life.” ~Katherine Mansfield
You were always an adventure
An open road I longed to take
You held freedom like a flag
One that flew higher than any uncaged bird
Your arms always opened wide
Wider than the windows of your Chevy Corvette
With dreams flying even faster
Every time you let me drive
You embraced life like a mother holding her child after a scare
Strong yet gentle as a kiss should be
Lost in the moment was the place we lingered
Somewhere between not a care in the world and the deepest of
longings
It is a magic that life cannot always provide
That pool can only be dipped for a time
But it dries up in the midst of learning to live
Sooner or later bills have to be paid
Agendas and responsibilities have to be met
There are dentist appointments and grocery store runs
And you find yourself lost in a different way
Buried in the business of staying afloat
One day at a stop light on my way to work
I saw a loose canary flying nearby
It landed on a branch and just looked about
I was not sure if he was lost or just relieved to be free
Yet, in my heart, I
knew the answer.
So well written...excellent poem about staying in the business of staying afloat...and it is getting harder during a pandemic.That little canary has the right idea.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Rall, and yes you are so right about during these times.
DeleteThis is so good, Carrie. The canary and the last line lifted it to another level. I also loved the part about the child after a scare.
ReplyDeleteps--it also made me think of this song, by another Texas gal
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7YP4f1xe_NA
Awwww thank you my friend! You made my day again!! I listened to the song, and Edie has a gorgeous voice.
DeleteThis beautifully captures how life happens and changes occur. the canary analogy is perfection!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Bev!!
DeleteSo many layers in your poem, a style you do so very well. Story telling the truth.
ReplyDeleteAwww thank you my friend!
DeleteThere such a sync with my thoughts. Your poem showcase a human side which cannot be ignored. Brilliant!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much my friend!
DeleteLuv the little canary, doing just what a canary does, in this business of living
ReplyDeleteHappy Sunday
Much💜love
Thank you dear Gillena! I know this has been a hard week for you. Sending hugs your way. 💜
DeleteFlying free is the aim of us all, methinks...♥
ReplyDeleteVery true my friend! 😍
DeleteCarrie, this is beautiful. Just gleaming with glimpses of the good places in life.
ReplyDeleteAwww thank you so much my friend! I value your opinion greatly! ✍️🤩
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the atmosphere and the philosophy weaving itself through your poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you Lisa! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
DeleteI liked your mention of the Chevy Corvette. I think I would live a life like that for a while. He could sell his Corvette and pay some bills. My 23 year old Mustang co vertible wouldn't go far, on the road or towards the bills.
ReplyDeleteLoved the prompt, thank you. You did wonders with it.
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Quite the memory Jim! It could be a great poem or essay!
DeleteI so resonate with "an open road I longed to take." This lifetime, responsibility always came first but, oh, I had dreams, had I been free. "Buried in the business of staying afloat" as you say so accurately. I always relate to your poems. I think we have travelled some similar roads.
ReplyDeleteI guess everything happens the way it does for a reason. I think you are right Sherry, our travels have been down many of the same roads. I hope the road before you now is full of peace and beauty!
DeleteOh love this ride through freedom and the weight of reality. This is one of your best poems. I too look to the birds and find those precious moments of winged freedom.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Susie!! That means so much to me!!
DeleteFreedom vs. Reality - Wonderful poem, strong message, Cary.
ReplyDeleteYou know that canary was clapping its feet together!
Thank you Sara, and yes I agree about the canary! :-)
DeleteA beautiful poem Carrie. I love the freedom of it and unfortunately, the reality that we all most deal with. Beautifully written as well as thought provoking.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much my friend! So glad you joined us for the Muse this week!
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