Linking with the Sunday Muse for Muse # 138 Come join us!
"Every heart has its secret sorrows which the world
knows not, and oftentimes we call a man cold, when he is only sad" ~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
I am not built of brick and mortar
nor were you
wide open spaces are always at risk to suffer damage in winter’s
frost
so the world’s sorrows always seeped in like a flood
beyond ego’s edifice
beyond flesh and bone
tears became a lingering fog
of the words one can never forget
and your eyes spoke each one like mockingbirds
moving through every cloud
it was a place one could get lost in
so I learned to close my eyes
and I became your distant forest
for you were too high up in the clouds
to ever realize you were so lost
nor see that I was longing to be found.
"I learned to close my eyes." That line moved me. I love the use of the mockingbird. Perfect fit.
ReplyDeleteThe focus of the image for me was the mysticism behind those blue eyes .... glad that was yours as well. A lovely poem Carrie. A special thank you for everything you contribute to The Sunday Muse.
ReplyDeleteThe way you turn the landscape inward brings the swell so close--this is beautiful and sad and clear.
ReplyDeleteI love how you tangentially reference the picture as prompt and hence such lovely wordsmithing
ReplyDelete"a lingering fog
of the words one can never forget
and your eyes spoke each one like mockingbirds"
u"bey0nd ego's edifice" the tears .... Oh yes! Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully penned
ReplyDeleteSounds great, Carrie. I would like to be way up in the clouds sometimes, too far to be reached. You made a good picture find this week, she is wistfully wanting human compassion and cowmanship. Thank you.
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"and I became your distant forest ... nor see that I was longing to be found." Yes, we are all so lost and in need of finding each other, and that is so hard.
ReplyDeleteNot "cowmanship", but "companship". Sorry,
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Beautifully woven! I felt a bit heartbroken at the thought of learning to close my eyes to avoid the reality of what truly was. I can feel the longing to be found when life seems to have lost it's way.
ReplyDeleteThis touches a place deep inside...
So beautifully creative to turn vision inward, to feel the soul speak. This is moved my heart.
ReplyDeleteToo high up in the clouds to realize you were lost....gosh, that reminds me of me. Though I do find my way by fits and starts.
ReplyDeleteLuv where the prompt took you
ReplyDeleteThanksxfor dropping by to read mine
Much💗love
Like a tapestry of the soul.
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